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Post By Ravin. 03/08/10, 02:39 am
I've recently begun [attempting] to CG again, and I was wondering if some people could give me a bit of honest critique?

Ignore the cel-shaded bodies and the soft-shaded eyes. XDD I suck at cel-shading all together, so critique would be AWESOME!

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Post By hyolee123. 03/08/10, 06:05 pm
actually your cel shading is much better than mine Razz
They're really cute >w<

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Post By Ravin. 03/08/10, 09:38 pm
Thank you very much! XD

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Post By Highlander. 03/08/10, 09:45 pm
They look very good.

Disclaimer, I'm not an artist.

The lacing, something people probably will not spot at first glance. Normally lace bottom to top, So across the bottom, diagonaly up to the top, and the ends hang down from the top hole (Or knot).

Not a biggy, still looks nice. But some artists spend a lot of time making sure the details look right.

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Post By Ravin. 03/08/10, 10:41 pm
I never even thought about the lacing! I kind of just added it in there for kicks. (baaaad ravin)

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Post By Highlander. 03/08/10, 10:44 pm
Ravin wrote:
I never even thought about the lacing! I kind of just added it in there for kicks. (baaaad ravin)


The little finishing touches.

Like I say I'm not am artist, but it looks perfect otherwise.

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Post By Ravin. 07/11/10, 08:09 pm
New CG's I was wondering if people could critique? I'm teaching myself and I learn more every time. XD

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Post By Highlander. 09/11/10, 07:44 pm
Cool. Good.

Um, are the corners of shoulders that square? Other than that really cool.

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Post By Ravin. 17/11/10, 07:50 pm
Sorry...I have a wobbly hand and I'm still learning to use my tablet. (After 5 months? Yea...I'm still pretty bad. Lol.)

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Also a sketchdump I sort of thought was anatomically interesting?
http://ravinesque.deviantart.com/art/Affections-186116222?q=sort%3Atime+gallery%3Aravinesque&qo=1#/d332v7r

Critique pleeease dA is too busy for it. D:

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Post By Highlander. 17/11/10, 08:33 pm
Naw, thats pretty good.

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Post By spazattack. 18/11/10, 10:31 pm
i reali love your characters! they're just so cute! !

your wanted poster and the sock puppet one are awsum!

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Post By Ravin. 18/11/10, 10:32 pm
thank you very much! Very Happy

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Post By Ravin. 21/11/10, 07:53 pm
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Not as well done...XD Practice practice practice. :3 First time I've drawn a woman AND someone with long hair.

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Post By Highlander. 21/11/10, 07:59 pm
tis good

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